2 Goals for the Second Multi Draft

The two goals I have for my second multi-draft are to be more concise in my descriptions and reasoning, as well as to have less grammatical errors. I think with this multi-draft this will be possible because I will spend more time on revising my rough draft, and therefore have more time to recognize mistakes and unnecessary words and sentences. By spending more time on revisions and revising for several short periods I will be able to produce a better product.